User:AshOrchid2254/Anax/Sappho Cornelia Catula Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AshOrchid2254


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AshOrchid2254/Anax


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anax

Evaluate the drafted changes
Make sure to preserve the original citations from the article you're editing. Remember, you can copy and paste with citations included as long as you copy while the article is set to edit.

You need to add citations for the parts you added to the first section.

You can link ‘Homeric’ (in the lead of the Mycenean wanax section) to the Homer page.

“Bronze age” can be connected to its own page

“concerning the ownership of islands” what islands?

Overall I think this is well done, you just need citations in that first section and try to add links to add links to other articles wherever possible.