User:Ashemmasmith/African-American women in the civil rights movement/Nhart2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ashemmasmith


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashemmasmith/African-American_women_in_the_civil_rights_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American women in the civil rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the article as well as your draft, I find that you have done a really great job and providing a lot more information for this article. Being that African American women in the Civil Rights Movement is such an important topic, I think it is excellent that you could add so much to the existing article. You talked about some other women activists in the movement that was not already presented in the existing article which I believe to be a smart move. Your sources also seem to check out to be reliable and scholarly. Some from journals and some from universities, which tell me they are peer reviewed and considered a good source. I would say that you really have nothing more to do in the article draft and good work.