User:Ashemmasmith/African-American women in the civil rights movement/Tashauni Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ashemmasmith


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashemmasmith/African-American_women_in_the_civil_rights_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American women in the civil rights movement
 * African-American women in the civil rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your edit is very detailed. I like how you included definitions for terms you used like "racism" and "sexism". I also think it is well written but needs to be cited more so it cannot be said there's a personal opinion on what you're saying. Your edits will strengthen this article because it is relevant to the article.