User:Asherm4802/Addiction psychology/Kjoi2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Asherm4802


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asherm4802/Addiction_psychology?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Addiction psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''You chose an interesting topic that most likely has multiple sources that you can use to improve it. However, the only addition that you've added is a definition. I would rephrase the definition in your own words instead of using the source's definition verbatim. I would also suggest finding some sources to expand upon the different models of addiction. I noticed some grammatical errors within the original article that should also be revised. I briefly scanned the original article and suggest that you perhaps add more detail to the "Addiction as a disease" section. Some of the facets of addiction as a disease were genetic, reward, memory, stress, and choice. As I mentioned previously, this seems like a great topic that you can explore more deeply and add more contributions to! '''