User:Asherm4802/Addiction psychology/Sab3434 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ASherm4802


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asherm4802/Addiction_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Addiction psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think the addition you have made in your draft are well written. I do however feel like it is very repetitive of the definition of addiction. It seems as if these are just more ways to describe addiction as a whole. Try to incorporate something unique about addiction. I did see the different models of disease. Maybe go into more depth on this subject. (~)