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The first senior commanders of the Polish Navy, their names were Bogumil Nowotny (captain), Joseph PILsudski (Marshal), Casimir Porebski (Rear-Admiral/Head of Polish State), as leading their country with greatness in mind there were three invasions from Germany and another invasion from the Soviet Union. The next thing that I learned from this article (don't use first person) was that the very first Navy that Poland created was in 1558 by the king of Poland at the time, Sigmund August, who called for a fleet of ships that were put under control of Thomas Sierpinski (admiral). The Polish Navy. (n.d.).

Polish flotillas that were created in 1919 and where the first Polish Naval units from the first world war that were modern (I don't really understand this sentence). These flotillas were first used against the Soviet Union which where a great success for the Polish Navy as they were able to help with the victory of the first invasion from Russia which is the only defeat that the Russians had during their reign. After the great war was concluded at the treaty of Versailles, Poland requested for some destroyers, light cruisers, submarine chasers, and many more ships. Although the requests for these ships had great reasons behind them, the Polish Navy was only outfitted with six ex-German torpedo boats. As we (don't use second person) look further into the future we (don't use second person) can see that when these request were denied they did not help with the defense during the early invasions during world war two. Murray, J. (n.d.). THE POLISH NAVY.

As Poland is looking toward the future they are trying to make additions to their navy. The first way that Poland was look at was at submarines. As Poland is unsure on what company to choose from they must make a decision on who should produce these submarines. The two major companies that are competing is a company out of Germany and the second company is out of the French Navy. The two are currently trying to convince if the Polish Navy should produce the 212CD subs created by the Germans which comes from its father ship the 212A. On the other hand the French Navy is offering that the Polish Navy should produce the Scorpène sub. With all of this to look at there are two major ways that can be chosen. Lesiecki, R. (2018, February 1)

In this picture there are men standing at a British port. Polish Navy gave to the British (What did the Polish give to the British? The port?) after Poland was invaded by the Germans and the Russian during World War two. During their time, the Polish Navy although weak, gave tremendous help to stop the Germans from cutting of the supply lines from America. I. (n.d.). THE POLISH NAVY IN BRITAIN

With Old Navy’s comes tradition and one of these are visiting ports that they visited during the second World War. The reason of this was to give a stop at a port that the ship has not been to in about three years. Also in the article I learned (don't use first person) about how the polish navy has been in many overseas missions such as the Enduring Freedom as well as Iraqi Freedom in the middle east. When reading this it was much to my surprise (don't use first person) because this small mine warfare ship was in such important wars. Another important thing that I learned (don't use first person) from this article was that this ship was going to be practicing in one of NATO’s operations on naval mine warfare. R. (2017, January 13).

Another piece of technology that Poland was looking at is Poland’s Navy’s new SAM turret that they test fired outside of Scotland. This was very important to the Navy because it was the first time that the crew on board the ship was able to operate on a SAM turret that was at its technology. Another piece of importance (maybe write "another important piece of information is") that this ship had many officials on board the ship (redundant) as well as the inspector of the Polish Navy. The reason why this is important is because the polish navy does not have many rocket sam turrets aboard their ships. N. (2018, August 31).

I. (n.d.). THE POLISH NAVY IN BRITAIN, 1939-1947. Retrieved March 14, 2019, from https://www.iwm.org.uk/collections/item/object/205154791

The Polish Navy. (n.d.). http://www.polandinexile.com/navy.htm

Murray, J. (n.d.). THE POLISH NAVY.

Dreadnaughtz. (2018, December 05). The Polish Navy in WW2. https://www.naval-encyclopedia.com/ww2/the-polish-navy

R. (2017, January 13). Poland's newest warship called into Portsmouth. Retrieved from https://www.royalnavy.mod.uk/news-and-latest-activity/news/2017/january/13/170113-polands-newest-warship-calls-into-portsmouth

N. (2018, August 31). Polish Navy Perry-class Frigate in Maiden SM-1 SAM Test Firing. Retrieved from https://www.navyrecognition.com/index.php/news/defence-news/2018/august-2018-navy-naval-defense-news/6476-polish-navy-perry-class-frigate-in-maiden-sm-1-sam-test-firing.html

Lesiecki, R. (2018, February 1). Orka – The German Way: Will the Polish Navy Submarines be Built in Szczecin? Retrieved from https://www.defence24.com/orka--the-german-way-will-the-polish-navy-submarines-be-built-in-szczecin

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First Source: I think this source is just a picture, so I'm not quite sure what kind of information you were able to gather from it.

'''Second Source: It says it's hosted by Paston, which I am assuming is a some sort of website maker. It does not have bias, so I think it is good source to use.'''

'''Third Source: This is another internet source, it did not have any bias. I think it is reliable source to use.'''

'''Fourth Source: The fourth source comes from a naval encyclopedia. I'm not sure if we are allowed to use encyclopedias as a source, but it does seem reliable.'''

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Sixth Source: This source was an article that just gave the facts of an event that happened related to this article.

'''Seventh Source: The article is written by Defense24.pl which is the leading Polish portal devoted to national security issues. I don't know if this has the potential of a bias on the article that is written, but I think there is. So, double check on that.'''

'''-It's a good start. Just make sure to get rid of the first-person and second-person language in your writing and fix minor grammar issues.'''