User:Ashlei22/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Narmer

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I was interested in learning more about the ancient Egyptian pharaohs and Narmer belonged to the first known period of pharaohs.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is not very long, however, it is still quite detailed. It is important to remember that there is limited information available since Narmer was a pharaoh during such an early period in Egyptian history. The lead section does give the reader a concise description of the overall topic and what the rest of the article will include. Almost all of the content present within the article is relevant, but Wiki has flagged one section as possibly trivial or unrelated. This section is entitled "Popular Culture" and it lists all films, shows, and stories that have included Narmer as a character. Wiki has asked the author to rewrite this section to explain how Narmer has impacted pop culture. Wiki has also asked that the author include secondary sources for the pop culture references they have listed. The article does appear to be written from a neutral point of view and the information within the article is backed up by reliable secondary sources.