User:Ashleighantrim2100/Blalock–Hanlon procedure/Daisylexi2244 Peer Review

Hello Ash-leigh!

I was able to pull up your sandbox and was able to see all of your writing and citations. I thought you listed great information about the procedure and great historical information as well. I liked that you also gave information regarding the doctors too. All of your citations look great too.

I don't know if it is a problem on my end, but when I try to view the article it won't take me to the page. It is saying the page cannot be found, this is popping up as a notification box on the wikipedia cite. I very well could be doing this completely wrong and be in the complete wrong area.

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