User:Ashleighfortunate/Sustainable engineering/Bsward Peer Review

I think all the photos on your article are very good, especially with the theme. Your captions are also very descriptive, which is extremely helpful as well, especially for someone skimming the article in the first place. It is also a great topic that is very important to the world today. ~

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Ashleighfortunate


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