User:Ashley.restel/Animal-assisted therapy/Jayde1974 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ashley.restel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashley.restel/Animal-assisted_therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal-assisted therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(I hope you don't mind but I highlighted some main points of your brief analysis)

I wonder if you will revise the lead to include mention of the ethical portion you will be editing.

So far, the synopses of the articles read to assist in editing the article seem great and your understanding of each very strong.

Right now the MEDICAL USES section is not entirely balanced. The pediatric, prison, and nursing sections are pretty even but the cognitive rehabilitation treatment is sorely lacking.

I beleive that your articles will contribute relevant, up to date information. It seems that animal assisted therapy can use some more research but is not necessarily a content gap. I am especially glad you found that 7th article, “The Practice and Ethics of Animal-Assisted Therapy with Children and Young People: Is It Enough that We Don’t Eat Our Co-Workers?” an article written by Evans, N., & Gray, C. in the British Journal of Social Work, published in 2012. I beleive it will aid in keeping the article's information balanced.

Your addition of verifiable facts and sourcing to the ethical section of the original article will be very beneficial although again, it does seem to be pretty well balanced within the article so, perhaps, just keep that in mind.

I'm sure you're gonna do great! What I have seen so far is very impressive and I am sure you will incorporate it with skill. ~