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Paragraph 1 some grammatical errors

Hard to read/doesn't flow

Origin has stuff about today's world and Pharos (which should be in the pharos section)

Construction talks about Alexander the Great's death

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Was known as the most powerful artificial light in the ancient world.

The light from the lighthouse of Alexandria not only warned ships away from the dangerous coastline, but it was a welcome beacon for weary travelers. It stood a symbol of promise of safety and of survival.

Stood guard outside of the busy port of Alexandria

The lighthouse shone for nearly 1700 years before it was badly damaged a series of earthquakes

In search of history: Seven wonders of the world [Video file]. (1997). Retrieved November 4, 2017, from https://fod.infobase.com/PortalPlaylists.aspx?wID=11854&xtid=42739