User:Ashleyglim/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Hello Kitty Murder

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it was a S Class Article that I am interested in. The article discusses the murder of Junko Furuta and her trial.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

There is a lead section, it is concise and includes all necessary elements of the introduction. Brief and precise.

Content:

Content is up to date, but can include more information about:


 * her past/ background
 * crime and why the crime took place
 * The criminals
 * prosecution
 * aftermath/ funeral

Some phrases are written as "truths" but are not solidified truths.

Tone and Balance:

Tone of the article sides with the victim (a given), and can be made into a more neutral tone.

- sentences such as "(the murderers did this)... All over a debt dispute of HK$20,000 (US$2,560)."

Organization:

No spelling error, but slight grammar errors and run on sentences.

Not enough sections per topics

Sourcing:

Good sourcing, most details have backed up sources.

Will look and include more reliable sources

Some sources are from 2000, but some sources are up to date from 2018-2020.

All links are working and still able to be used

Images and Media:

There are no good images and medias. Only image included is the location where the murder took place.

No photo of the victim or the killers.

Overall Impressions:

The overall status from this article is S Class Article.

Strengths for this article shows the is the details for the attack type and contents boxes.

Needs improvement and more added information about before the murder, why the murder occured, how they found the body..etc

Images and placing of those images need to be worked on