User:Ashleykacou11/Hashtag activism/Akmohsenin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AshleyKacou11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ashleykacou11/Hashtag_activism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hashtag activism

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did a good job of introducing the topic in the Lead and giving a bit of background with the examples. I also like that you included some hashtags that the original article didn't have and you looked into the history of the trend which goes back to the Iran election hashtag. I appreciated that you added some insight by calling Hashtag Activism the "new age of civil rights", but you still kept the content neutral. I think the lead is concise and comprehensive but could have a bit more info on the topic. Maybe include some info about the increase in web searches related to the topics that are currently being talked about on social media to show that this concept can actually lead to results.

All the content in the article body seemed to be relevant to the topic, and I like that you included the specific dates that influential social media platforms launched because it kind of marks the beginning of the new age of civil rights movements. I think that you addressed the Wikipedia equity gaps well by including all the communities that are using, and benefiting from, this form of activism. I noticed that you included Women's Rights as one of the topics and I wanted to suggest that there is probably a lot of content on that topic especially now considering the recent Texas legislation and the newly elected Governor of VA. I specifically like that you included information about when Twitter made hashtags "clickable" because that seems like a big catalyst into the growth of hashtag usage.

I think you introduced some really good ideas to the article and have a good start to further expand on some of the topics. Maybe elaborate a bit further on the role that social media algorithms play in boosting or censoring certain content. I remember the Lebanon crisis as a specific example because a lot of info would get censored on Instagram stories and donation links would not spread as quickly. All your sources look substantive and reliable, I just I think you accidentally listed one of them twice in the references. Otherwise you did a good job of maintaining organization and a neutral tone considering you are discussing some publicly controversial topics.