User:Ashleyrv2018/CSI Effect/DesSantiago Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ashleyrv2018


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ashleyrv2018/CSI Effect


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * CSI effect

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the fifth paragraph under Background, don't forget to cite what "research" you are referring to.


 * "Other popular critiques of crime shows relate to the misrepresentation of the average case length, the underestimation of the caseload of criminal justice personnel, and the overestimation of clearance rates. Research on this phenomenon has mainly focused on the influence of DNA and forensic science on viewers' perceptions."

I could not find much else of your additions from the regular article, but the tone of the sentence listed above is very neutral so far. I do believe there should also be more sources incorporated into your work, to make it more reliable.