User:Asia1281/Sandbox

Perhaps this is more cleanup than definition, but the line "A system designed to prevent unauthorized access to or from a private network." seems to be a fragment. I think proper grammar usage should be encouraged as it may help improve the reputation of Wikipedia. -Asia1281- (talk) 17:09, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

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Pre Draft Section Incomplete & Possibly Misleading
The last statistic in this section appears to be for the 'broad jump' workout, but the sentence appears to be incomplete. Additionally, the statistics are not the numbers officially released by the NFL for the Combine. His workout statistics were released as 4.68s 40-Yard Dash, 33.5" Vertical Jump, and 9'10" Broad Jump.-Asia1281- (talk) 15:29, 4 August 2009 (UTC)