User:Askyia/Numidians/Traderjo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Askyia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Askyia/Numidians?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Numidians

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content in sandbox is new and relevant information to the current version of the article on Numidians. Current article only mentions the Numidian's war history, but does not discuss their lifestyle as a culture within North Africa. Draft revision of this article does a good job of adding supplementary information to describe the culture of this group, describing their lifestyle and the economy in which they organized their community around. User does a good job of using a multitude of sources from reputable sources; only potential recommendation would be to connect popular referential terms to other Wikipedia pages.