User:Asofrankcsueb/Druid (Dungeons & Dragons)/Godemonite Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Asofrankcsueb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Asofrankcsueb/Druid (Dungeons & Dragons)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Druid (Dungeons & Dragons)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

I believe the lead is very concise although I feel that it could be given a little more detail about the Druid.

Content

The content of the article is good but it does lack in some places. There could be more information in the Original and Basic Dungeons & Dragons sections if there is more to find. The fact that Druids can't wear armor, as pointed out in several places, I feel it could just be defined in the Lead, rather than the full explanation in the 3rd Edition section. The reason for this, is because since it is further expanded upon in the 3rd Edition, then it should be so that this is something that defines them from that edition on, and in previous editions.

The Essentials section could be expanded on as well including maybe talking about the alternate Druid version Sentinel.

Tone and Balance

The article to me seems neutral and I do not see any content that sticks out as being biased in any way

Images and Media

There could definitely be some images of the Druid class at the top of the page. There could also be different iterations through out the various versions as well

Overall Impressions

The article is well put together. There could of course, be a lot more content added, especially since Dungeons & Dragons spans out through an enormous collection of books for a player to dive into and find out more information about the class and all it's different variations.