User:Asofrankcsueb/Druid (Dungeons & Dragons)/Yllenerad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Asofankcsueb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asofrankcsueb/Druid_%28Dungeons_%26_Dragons%29?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Druid (Dungeons & Dragons)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article seems quite thorough already, but there is definitely room for improvement, such as adding any missing citations or information to further improve the article. After reading both the chosen article and Sandbox, it does not appear as though any edits have been really made. For that reason, I will offer suggestions that may possibly help the Wiki editor improve their chosen article.

It is nice that the Lead is brief; however, it may be able to be revised to somewhat introduce that the history of druids will be discussed in the article. Overall, the Wikipedia article on this topic appears to have a nicely organized structure, so it will be fairly easy to add or edit to this to enrich the article's content.

In the Article body, the main content touches on the different editions. It might be helpful to add images so that readers can visualize the characters being discussed. Since the Lead section addresses a difference between clerics and druids, it may also be helpful to input an image and expound on their differences to further depict the topic.

Some sources are rather out of date, so it may help to discard the old sources and replace it with more recent information to improve the article's accuracy. It may also be helpful to add more to the creative origins of these characters so that readers can understand the significance of the topic.

The article so far seems pretty thorough, but it has a lot of potential for improvement!