User:Asp2181/Bordetella pertussis/Mkpolite1 Peer Review

General info
User: Asp2181
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Asp2181/Bordetella pertussis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bordetella pertussis

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the drafted changes, I think the group did a good job on expanding the transmission and infection section of the article. I do think that there should be more citations for the information that is talked about. Some of what is being written is not common knowledge and there are not citations connected to the information.

The addition of the progression of disease section is interesting, however the information is about the disease rather than the bacteria. I would include this information on the Pertussis wiki page rather than on the bacteria wiki page. Though the bacteria wiki page has a Pertussis section, I think that what was additionally written is applicable elsewhere.

I think that finding more information on the metabolic and physiological processes would be important to add to this article since there is not a section already made in this article.