User:Aspezikian/Dual therapy stent/Ayaa7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aspezikian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aspezikian/Dual_therapy_stent?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Lead:
Good introduction that introduces the topic. One thing you might want to try changing is the amount of times "stent" is said in the lead. There may be some synonyms or exchange it for a pronoun. I really like your integration of the linked words that can help readers go from article to article.

Maybe introduce the challenges you mentioned in the lead for people to better understand the importance of your topic.

Typos:
In the history section, you put lead instead of led. Few typos in the history section that are underlined in red.

Overall:
I think you did a great job explaining. You have a neutral tone. The order is very comprehensive and I don't think you mention anything that doesn't belong. The biggest thing would be to go through and fix the spelling errors and the one grammar error I mentioned. Also it could be helpful to add pictures. The content is good though.