User:Aspezikian/Dual therapy stent/Mnm894 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aspezikian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dual_therapy_stent


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dual_therapy_stent

Lead

 * Lead provides a nice and detailed explanation of what a dual therapy stent is.
 * I like how you bring up an example stent and its significance in the lead.
 * one thing though, if it's stylized as COMBO in all caps, then you forgot to make it all caps in the last sentence in the lead "The Combo Stent has received CE Mark approval."

Content

 * Overall, all your content follows a logical order and describes each point in detail.
 * Nice job on linking specific terms and concepts to their respective Wikipedia page, it makes it easy to follow along while learning about related topics.
 * In the background, last sentence "However, despite these improvements, cocerns persited on risk of stent thrombosis." should it be "concerns persisted"?
 * Good job on mentioning the reason as to why the need for Dual therapy stents became needed (due to the drug-eluting stents)
 * in the COMBO dual therapy stent subsection
 * ""a abluminal (facing the vessel wall) ", change a to an
 * Good job on the overall content, I wouldn't say that you really need to add anything

Tone and Balance

 * overall neutral tone! You state the facts without incorporating opinions or using words that promote/discourage anything"
 * no bias

Sources and References

 * The content is properly cited with sources listed
 * Enough sources to have covered every point that you mentioned (and could have mentioned)

Organization

 * Very logical order, going from the background to purpose to development
 * Any grammatical and spelling errors have been noted in their respective sections above

Images

 * Only suggestion I would give is that, if possible, maybe provide a more detailed caption for your image?
 * I'm not sure if that's possible since I personally didn't add an image and don't know if it lets you edit that or not.

Overall

 * Overall, great job! It's very well written and I don't think much changes would be needed between this and your final draft. :)