User:Asrogers23/Jim Henson/Asegura01 Peer Review

General info
Asrogers23
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jim Henson
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asrogers23/Jim_Henson?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review by Aliya S.

Thur. April 25th

Lead
Guiding questions:

The lead is done well so I would not add anything. Maybe if there is something particular about his creative journey and why he wanted to focus on nature, children's entertainment or his passion could help. Maybe adding a quote he is most known for could help as to why he is passionate about his job.

Content
The information is relevant as it concerns his life, his work and his legacy. If there is anything interesting you believe could highlight his passion. I would say for the bolded paragraph finding a citation could help verify the information. For this paragraph since it is bolded maybe add if there is anything that could enhance what he is known for as a puppeteer. The mention of his use of puppets was interesting, so adding anything about that could enhance why he is important or relevant to this art form. The paragraph seems to have been published as it is similar to the article so possibly look at ways it can be added on to.

Tone and Balance
The tone an balance of the article is factual and to the point to pointing out his talents. If there is anything you think could help about his legacy or known about him could emphasize his relevance or impact.

Sources and References
The references all seem to work or are archived. If you use any just make sure to cite and add to references.

Organization
Guiding questions:

I think the content is well written and very in depth. I would say for the tribute section maybe highlighting all the tributes as lists like

2001


 * tribute
 * tribute
 * tribute

2002


 * tribute
 * tribute
 * etc

Possibly doing it this way can make it easier to read and navigate or a way to make it easier to digest could help as this part was repetitive.

Images and Media
Since this is about puppeteering looking at pictures of Henson on set, with puppets or more images with puppets could help the article stand out more. Since the text is dense, adding 2-3 pictures or more could help enhance the article and make it more lively.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

The resources seem sufficient so unless there is something that needs to be added make necessary changes.

Overall impressions
The article could be improved with more pictures of Henson or puppets since the text is dense. If any adjusting on the organization could make the reading more legible or easier to understand could help as well. Overall, the article is very thorough so unless there is something that must be added make sure to make necessary changes.