User:AsteforiiAlbicans/Introgression/Adam.PerrettGCSU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adam.PerrettGCSU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AsteforiiAlbicans/Introgression


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Introgression

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I would switch the comma and semicolon in ",even when human-directed;" to ";even when human-directed," --> I'm not an English major so I may be wrong
 * * Image --> Could you make the horizontal lines slightly darker? They are a little hard to see when just looking real quick
 * I really didn't see anything else wrong with the article
 * All of the edits made sense and were grammatically correct to my knowledge
 * The lineage fusion paragraph was simple and explained how it works so anyone could understand what they are reading
 * Overall, edits were very well written