User:Astoudiallo10/Social equality/CoVo2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Astoudiallo10)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Astoudiallo10/Social equality


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social equality

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Pros


 * a sandbox filled with a long list of well written and detailed history of Social Equality
 * lots of places that this information could be either slotted into the existing article with no problems
 * lots of potential
 * work is to the point and works around the article to add to it, if/when it is published
 * contains hyperlinks to appropriate Wikipedia articles

Cons


 * The additions are still in sandbox and seems to still be a draft as of 11:10pm, April 30, meaning that these additions have not been added to the article yet.
 * as this seems to be a draft, sources needed to corroborate their statements haven't been added
 * other parts of the work lack hyperlinks to appropriate Wikipedia articles
 * no bibliography

overall, it has all the potential of a well written article, I hope they get their sources and edits in before to get a grade on this fine work.