User:AstroWiki143/History of neuroimaging/Bibliography

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Proposed Changes


 * I think the article needs a lot more citations. There are entire paragraphs and even sections without a single one.
 * Rewording needs to happen throughout the article due to information being added verbatim from sources.
 * Someone in the talk page in the article questioned whether the last section "Recent breakthroughs" should even be in this article and I think it is worth discussing.
 * Restructuring/Reorganization of the sections and/or the addition of sections could prove useful to the overall cohesiveness of the article.
 * MAJOR reorganization and removal of some sections are needed. OR renaming of the article entirely.
 * Current sections focus too much on neuroimaging as a whole and not on its history.
 * The addition of images would be great to add more interest and a good visual for some of the different modalities and people mentioned
 * Highlighting other people who played a big part in the history of neuroimaging would be a good addition as well.
 * The article has many incomplete or vague dates. Adding more specific dates, particularly the years, would improve the article.
 * A brief summary of neuroimaging would be a nice addition to reader comprehension. It could add gateways for additional sections to add to the topic more meaningfully.