User:Astrosfan1212/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Commerce Clause

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because we talked about it in Constitutional Law so I felt I knew a decent amount on the topic.

Evaluate the article
I feel like they used their opinions in the article, they said that the new Court decisions have restricted things that were formally allowed and they said whether they are interstate commerce or not.

Lead Section

I feel like the lead section is very strong and informative beside the little bit of opinion work at the end.

Content

The Content is very informative and an interesting read. They did a very good job of segwaying to other topics. I like how they went through the different eras of the commerce clause.

Sources and References

The sources are good but I don't think they are good enough. They have parts where they cite a decision or writing from a founding father or a justice and then copy the article and said who wrote it but they don't provide a link to the actual writing. This could lead to things being out of context

Organization and writing quality

This is very well organized and everything fits together well. I feel that the grammar is strong as well.

Images and Media

There are no images and they could be very useful. There could be pictures of the justices discusses or many other things.

Talk discussion page

The talk page is very well related. You can see revisions and there are conversations.

Overall Impressions

I like this article and I feel like I learned a lot from it. There are enough sources to make it trustworthy.