User:Astrosfan1212/Expert witness/Winchester3324 Peer Review

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Astrosfan1212
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The first thing I would do is insert your citations, as you credit some authors, but don't cite where you got the information. Your first paragraph also seems to discuss two different topics about expert witnesses that would be better suited in separate topics. All I can tell bout the purpose of your article is that you are discussing expert witnesses in relation to testifying. I would try and be more specific about your overall topic.