User:AszlynA/Coal pollution mitigation/Jojo0577 Peer Review

General info
(AszlynA)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AszlynA/Coal pollution mitigation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Coal pollution mitigation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey, you've made some really good changes to this article! I only have a couple things to recommend, one of them being that there is a bit of redundancy in the information you provide. While it's all good information, sometimes you repeat it in different sections- the main example of this being the second paragraph of the description. I think you could get away with getting rid of that article or at least compacting the information in it might be useful. Another thing I think might be worth revisiting is the section on clean coal and the environment, it might just be me, but I found the section on oil recovery a little confusing. Really, my main thing to recommend to you is to make sure you get your citations in as well as a reference page. You do have some really good information but Wikipedia definitely won't like it if you don't back it up with some really good references. Still, a really good article!