User:At2118/Mitosis/AshePlattz001 Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? At2118
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Mitosis

Lead
The lead is concise and meaningful. Due to At2118's grammatical changes, the lead is more readable and conveys information in a much more clear manner. Additionally, At2118 included some changes that added the right nouns being used. Instead of having vague text speaking about telophase, it was actually reworded such that it made more sense.

Contents
The material within the article remain relevant to the topic of mitosis and what occurs with it.

Tone and Balance
The tone of the article remains neutral, conveying only pure information on mitosis..

Sources and References
The references were a bit messy when it came to the article itself, as it wasn't even referencing the nouns correctly before. Thanks to At2118's revision, the lead now properly states telophase, and the references inside the article make more sense.

Organization
The content within the article itself is fully readable and displays the information quite well. There are clear divisions within topics, and the information isn't overwhelming.

Images and Media
There are plenty of images and videos that successfully portray the processes of mitosis and the things within it.

Overall impressions
Overall, the article has a nice introduction and finish, and stays relevant to the topic throughout the whole thing. Plenty of images and videos to visualize the concepts, and there were few grammatical mistakes (some being fixed by At2118).