User:Atallent/Being Digital/Flagg2020 Peer Review

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 * Atallent
 * Being Digital

Lead
The lead is very concise and to the point. While previewing the topic of the article you seemed to have kept it objective and plainly informative. You set up the landscape for the audience to read and gain more information.

Content
All of the content is up to date and related to your topic. It is good that you focused on the impact Negropante has had. You illustrate his importance beautifully.

Tone and Balance
All of the content in the article keeps a neutral tone by not trying to persuade us. Everything is strictly meant to inform us. Great job.

Sources and Reference
All of the information you provided is backed by credible and reliable sources. There could have been more but the ones you do have do a great job in giving the reader more detailed information.

Organization
The content is simple and easy to read. It is meant for the general audience to gain information about the subject. Everything is slayed in a manner that is not confusing and unorganized. Good job.

Images and Media
There is one photo of the book "Being Digital" this is a great photo bt I would like to see an image to the man. It would be good to put a space with all of the great information you provided.

Overall impressions
Overall this is a good article that could maybe have some extra additions. A little more expanded information with more photos could make this a great article. For the work you already have, good job.