User:Atallent/Being Digital/Jtakin02 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) User:Atallent
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Atallent/BeingDigital

Lead evaluation
At the time of the peer review, the lead has not been altered in accordance with the contributions in the draft. However, it provides a good start that could lead to helping either the user contribution or the contributions of others.

Content evaluation
The content includes an outline for further contributions to the Being Digital article, including plans for a section called the Negroponte Switch, referring to a concept from the book. There is plenty of room to expand that information in order to further flesh out the Being Digital article.

Tone and balance evaluation
The tone is designed to be neutral. In the draft, the user points out two sections in the article that are not neutral. The user suggests using secondary sources in order to further solidify the validity of the information within the article.

Sources and references evaluation
Sources are linked to EBSCO services. The user more than likely used GALILEO to find their sources, and then linked the article from there. However, GALILEO can only be accessed from permitted accounts, via the library. For the article itself, I recommend citing it in MLA Format, with the name of the article, the publication, and which issue of the publication it is.

Organization
Guiding questions:

Organization evaluation
The information that is there at the moment needs to be a bit more organized, with eached planned subject being it's own sub header.

Images and media evaluation
There are no images.