User:Ataylor41/Black Girl in Paris/UNique04 Peer Review

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Ataylor41
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Original looks pretty good. I like that you have focused on adding more information to the body.

Picture: This is such great work! I can not imagine how long this took, and it looks great.

Plot Section: You could change the name to plot summary, as well as add in a bit more information.

Importance of Paris: The reference you have could be cited differently. For example when you click on cite just insert in the URL, which would then generate a number looking citation. This will make the page look more organized and better formulated. As well as you may have have to fix your integration of the article/citation if you decide to change the citation style. I like that you incorporated this section, but there could be more information.

Film Adaptation Section: I like this section. Maybe you could make this section more concise and keep the information more tailored to information solely about the films adaptation. If you want to incorporate more information about Kiandra Parks, you could add possibly a separate section dedicated to her since it appears that she does not already have a Wikipedia page.

Overall: I admire you dedication to the picture. I know that took so much of your time. I also think that with some added information this is will further improve the page. Also I have seen many well rated pages only capitalize the letter of the first word. For example: Film Adaptation can be Film adaptation.