User:Atghmb/Astronomer Royal/KFluh Peer Review

General info
Atghmb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Astronomer Royal
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Atghmb/Astronomer_Royal?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that the article additions go into the fact that the title of "Astronomer Royal" wasn't always the exact title. As well as that the title seemingly just appeared regardless of what was usually used in paper work. I also think the placement of your additions make a cohesive story.

I think you should go into what the difference between the "President of the Royal Society" and the "Astronomer Royal". I feel like the exact "job" or purpose of the Astronomer Royal, is slightly muddled so, going a bit more into that could be helpful. You have a section later with nothing in it "Notable Discoveries" which once information is added will probably help with this too.

Overall, I think you're doing a great job. The more information you add about what Astronomer Royal's did will get the importance of them across.