User:Athanasius22/Differential Fitness/Bberumen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Athanasius22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Differential_fitness?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This was a really great article! I had few comments to suggest. The lead section was clear and introduced the topic well. I do suggest making the lead section a bit more concise by only mentioning the names of the studies for the different ways differential fitness is present in nature because the studies are expanded on later in the article. All the content present in the article was relevant to the topic and supported by numerous references with working links. I also appreciated all the hyperlinks throughout the article. This is going to be very helpful for other people if they don't understand a certain concept or species. Overall, the article was well written and easy to understand. I liked that there were several interesting and appropriate examples for each section. Good job!