User:Atustudent4/Jeffrey Pfeffer/Jmurdock6 Peer Review

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Atustudent4
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Jeffrey Pfeffer

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I think you did a very nice job explaining evidence-based management. I think you also did a good job explaining what the rules of power are. The definition of power is a very good way to start that portion of the article.

It does not appear that any of your edits are showing in the article live on Wikipedia. In your sandbox, you do not make any references while you are making the edits. I would also revisit the second sentence in your evidence-based management section, I believe the wording should be “when an idea is presented”. The other suggestion I would make is regarding the quote from Jeffry Pfeffer and the training module we completed on Plagiarism – I would recommend re-writing the quote into your own words or thoughts and using that since the quote is not necessarily a famous speech or something that would be required to convey the point that could not be done by writing it yourself.

Great job!

Jmurdock6