User:Atustudent4/Jeffrey Pfeffer/Kayyaguirre Peer Review

General info
Atustudent4
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Atustudent4/Jeffrey Pfeffer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Jeffrey Pfeffer

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading over your drafted changes I believe everything you included is relevant information to Jeffery Pfeffer. I think adding the information on the Rules of Power and Evidence-Based Management in separate paragraphs under the work section is best since it highlights both sets of work. However one thing I would suggest adding in the in text citations within the paragraph even though you have the references underneath these citations are still important. I looked at your references and they seem to have relevant information to the paragraphs you have added. You have written everything in a neutral point of view and it does not seem biased in anyway. I also think that adding a specific space for Awards and Honors is a good idea to highlight the impressive accomplishments of Pfeffer. Again here I would attach the citations link to each bullet point award.