User:Atustudent4/Jeffrey Pfeffer/Pat Miner23 Peer Review

General info
Atustudent4
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Atustudent4/Jeffrey Pfeffer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Jeffrey Pfeffer

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did a great job with the quotes you used in the work section and I think all the information you added is relevant to Jeffery Pfeffer and important to talk about. I checked the sources used and all of them are good and they work for the information provided. One thing I think you can add is the details talked about in the Evidence-Based Management, I think it is a tad sparse. I also think that you should combine the Evidence-Based Management into the Work section, and more just use it as a subsection.