User:Auburnen/Cater Hall/Molly Adams Peer Review

When talking about Dean Katherine Cooper Cater and how she added sororities, honors societies, and clubs, I would find exactly which extracurricular activities she founded, if you can find just a few!

In the fight for women rights I would try to add another ending statement if possible to draw the article together. I would keep the current one but see if you can add one more underneath.

I think the article is well written!!

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