User:Auburnen/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Auburn University traditions

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I go to Auburn and the traditions are something I am familiar with. It matters because the Auburn traditions are part of what makes Auburn the school it is. My first impression was good, but that the A-Day section and "other traditions" section of the article were lacking in information.

Evaluate the article
There is no lead section on this article, which definitely needs to be added. There are many paragraphs added to the Toomer's Corner section, while the Homecoming section is only one sentence. These sections are great, but they could definitely be expanded upon. There is an unbiased viewpoint throughout the article which is awesome. The sources are good, thorough, and all the links work. Overall, the grammar is correct, but there are a few spots that could be fixed for grammatical correctness and made more concise in the longer sections. More photos should be added to the sections that lack them. The existing photos are well captioned and show what the article is talking about. Someone on the talk page has a differing opinion about what makes an "old growth" tree, which just depends on what you believe. This article is rated C within both the WikiProject Higher Education and WikiProject Alabama. Overall, I believe this article is a good start, but it is ultimately underdeveloped. There are lots of strengths in this article, like the amount of sources and unbiased information. I think it could just be improved by adding more information to some sections.