User:Audicm/Color psychology/Krainer02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Audicm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Color psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article covered various amounts of information throughout. The lead section of the article presented the topic concisely and provided a brief description for the rest of the article. Under the section "Game Immersion", I would suggest adding examples of how exactly color psychology is presented throughout different gaming systems. I would suggest the same for the section on influence of color. Providing more examples on the subtopic would offer the readers better insight on the information presented. For instance, I would go deeper in discussion about how certain restaurants such as McDonalds, Chic Fil A, and more use certain colors to attract their customers by appealing to their hunger.

The information seemed to be up to date and correlated with the topics and subtopics of the article. The content was well organized and I would not recommend any changes. The article remained very unbiased and seemed to speak from a neutral stand point. This article thoroughly presented valuable information about color psychology while remaining organized and unbiased.