User:Audlz/Chen Mingxia (1940-Present)/Flamingo511 Peer Review

General info
Adulz/Chen Mingxia (1940-Present)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Chen Mingxia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):There is none that I could find.

Lead
The lead in the article was a mix of a biography and a lead. It has necessary information about what the article will focus on but her birth year should be taken out. I would add a sentence about her writings and how she wrote multiple books regarding her work. The introductory sentence needs to be updated since the birth year shouldn't be a part of the lead.

Content
The content is relevant to the topic. I was wondering if there was more background information about her. Is there any information that can be made into a biography? I understand if there was no sources that went into more detail about her childhood or just more general background information. Other than that all the content seems to be up to date.

Tone and Balance
The overall tone of the article is neutral there are no biased statements and no positions taken regarding certain topics. There are also no opinions that are trying to persuade the reader. Overall this section is great there need to be no changes made here.

Sources and References:
There are sources linked throughout the article which is great. However, the section on General Work in the Gender Equality Space needs the citations fixed. It seems like the citations were not linked they were placed in MLA format. However, it seems like the person working on this did leave a note at the end of the section stating they need to convert the citations.

The sources are all current and from scholarly databases which is great. All the links worked except for reference 2 which was on JSTOR. I could not find more sources on Chen Mingxia these seem to be the ones that would appear the most on databases.

Organization
The organization of the article is a little confusing I think adding the dates of when books were written or when certain events occurred would help make the article flow better. By not having dates of when certain events happened I am not sure if each heading is in chronological order.

There are no grammatical errors and it is easy to read.

Images and Media
There are no images or media.

Overall Impressions
Overall the article is good is just needs a lead and there needs to a better flow throughout. There needs to be dates of when things occurred. There are multiple references as well as linking to other Wikipedia pages with the exception of the General Work in the Gender Equality Space section which seems like someone will get to working on that. Also I am assuming this is a new article so I feel like there needs to be more background information. I got to know what Chen Mingxia worked on and did but I am not sure where she is from, what her childhood was like, if she is still alive, did she pass away (if so when)?

Other than that I think the draft is solid in explaining the work that Chen Mingxia has done.