User:AudreyS99/Blackbelly lanternshark/Kkitrick Peer Review

General info
Group 2's work on the blackbelly lanternshark : Adoung, AudreyS99, Jeremiahbravo, Lopezvilan, Rexyshy8
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AudreyS99/Blackbelly lanternshark
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Blackbelly lanternshark

Lead

 * the lead seems to do a good job at touching on each of the bigger points of the article (taxonomy, distribution, morphology, diet, bioluminescence)
 * good addition of sentence about bioluminescence, which isn't part of the article's current lead
 * it mentions that the sharks are ovoviviparous, but that isn't mentioned or expanded on anywhere else in the article

Content

 * The diet section is good at touching on regional variation in diet
 * Audrey mentioned in her review that linking vocabulary words would be helpful for all sections, and I think that could especially apply here with the different prey species
 * The taxonomy section could be expanded upon if there are more resources available, maybe its closer relatives? the section just seems a little short
 * the habitat section is good, i like how sources were included after each sentence

Tone & Balance

 * there is neutral tone throughout the article, and i don't feel as if any viewpoints are overrepresented or pushed onto the audience

Sources & References

 * a good amount of sources were added in the sandbox compared to the article
 * almost all of them are from after the 2010s, so they are relatively recent and updated
 * some of the sources in the sandbox have red text that says 'cite journal' and 'check date values in date'
 * most of the sources are online, so maybe more books from the library can be looked into for some variety

Organization

 * Audrey provided a really helpful outline of how the topics can be organized in the sandbox (thanks!)
 * maybe in the habitat section, the second sentence ("E. lucifer is categorized as a mesopelagic fish, preferring shallower and more southern habitats.") should go first since it is more of a broad topic, and then the paragraph can carry on with geographic locations
 * similarly, in the taxonomy section, maybe the second sentence ("It is a member of the family Etmopteridae which is in the order Squaliformes.") could go first

Images & Media

 * currently, there are no images or media planned to be added in the sandbox, but I think an image would definitely help
 * I would be willing to look into an image to correlate to the morphology section, as this is where it could be most useful to add one