User:AudreyS99/Blackbelly lanternshark/Rexyshy8 Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing the work of : AudreyS99, Jeremiahbravo, Kkitrick, Adoung, Lopezvilan
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AudreyS99/Blackbelly_lanternshark?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Blackbelly lanternshark

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I like the edited lead section, as the original one did not use correct reference formatting. A lot of good information was included that shows up later in the other sections in more detail. Formatting of the lead is also good. This is a good preview of the rest of the article.

Content

The content that was added gives a much better comprehensive understanding of the E. lucifer as the original article barely had any information regarding this organism. The article covers good points such as taxonomy, habitat, diet, and morphological description, all of which is relevant to understand this deep sea creature.

Tone and Balance

The writing uses a neutral tone without any information being presented with some sort of bias. There is a good balance of basic information, as well as evidence found from scientific articles from various studies. Good formal tone is used. One suggestion would be do possibly make the "Bioluminescence" section slightly less science heavy, especially the last paragraph and make it more understanding for readers that may lack a scientific background.

Sources and References

The article contains many sources and references to support the information demonstrated on E. Lucifer. They all seem to be from credible scientific articles. The sources are clickable and lead you to the corresponding article where the information was extracted from. There are also a lot of current articles which is great. I also really like how there are a lot of words that are made to be a direct link to another Wiki page, making it easy for readers to access additional information if needed.

Organization

The organization of the article is really good, for being a draft. Make sure to put the corresponding paragraphs under the correct headings as proposed towards the top of the article.

Images and Media

I would recommend incorporating an image of the organism to help readers visualize the anatomy and morphology of this creature. By including some images, this would enhance understanding of the topic.

Overall Impressions

Overall, I think the edits made to this article greatly enhance understanding of E. Lucifer, as the original article lacked a lot of information. I definitely think an image would be beneficial in giving a visual representation of the organism. Once everything is organized how it is outlined, I think this will be a good comprehensive article that gives a good description of this blackbelly lanternshark.