User:Audrey Tinnin/sandbox

In the article called Traditional Ecological Knowledge, there seemed to be a fair amount of background that provided context and insight into the topic. There did however seem to be several things that I would change:

-Ellaboration; it is a rather broad topic and there is a lot to learn so nothing should be cut short

-Source Bias; the sources provided were fine it just seemed to favor the indigenous rights it needs opposing viewpoints

-Citations overall seemed to be accurate when I checked them by clicking on the links.

-Paraphrasing; When I double checked the sources for close paraphrasing, it seemed that the website did a great job of editing the text and not using close paraphrasing.