User:Audreyb07/J. California Cooper/Lillyroehrig Peer Review

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This is amazing! The lead, early life, and career sections are all neutral in their writing and appear to provide an adequate summary of her life and story. I also liked how you inserted the reference numbers when you paraphrased from a specific source. Additionally, all of your sources appear to be from credible places, examples being the New York Times, The Washington Post, and The Los Angeles Times. For the lead, I would maybe try to add a small summary/glimpse into what the rest of the article entails. This will let the reader know what they should expect.