User:Augiestudent.24/Free Breakfast for Children/Coloradogal1440 Peer Review

Lead


 * lead has been updated to add more in depth information on the article
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * I think it would be beneficial to keep the founders of the Black Panther Party in the lead instead of taking it out
 * Concise, not overly detailed
 * Content
 * Content added is relevant and adds dimension to previously written article
 * Yes
 * No
 * Yes, the section added about women's contributions in the Black Panther Society addresses the equity gap
 * Tone
 * Neutral content was added
 * no claims seem heavily biased
 * womens participation seems a it over represented
 * content added does not persuade leader in one direction or another
 * Sources and references
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Yes
 * Organization
 * Yes
 * No
 * Yes
 * Images and Media
 * Add more than just the 1 pic for the womens contributions! adding another picture in another section would bring it together more!
 * Overall Impressions
 * Very good article so far! Strong minor and major edits

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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