User:Austin2323/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Freshman's dream - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason for choosing this article is I am a math geek. After college, I would like to teach middle school algebra and learn more about the subject. There is always room for improvement.

Evaluate the article
The lead to this article is concise straight to the point. The content is current (up to date) and relevant to society. I don't think anything is missing from this article, but maybe they could've elaborated on a few key notes. I did appreciate the hyperlinks to the content I was unaware of. This article is neutral as is based upon mathematical facts. The sources are not current, but they are good sources and the links do work. The writing is well-organized if you have a general comprehension of the topic prior. Some individuals unaware of formula/topic they feel as though they're reading alien language. I did really like the example and illustration they provided. Overall, I'd give this article an 8.2 for rating. This article would be a 10 if it was more structurally sound will diction and organization.