User:AustinScott99/Freshwater fish/Lbothwe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AustinScott99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * n/a (no page exists currently?)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freshwater fish

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm not sure if any edits have been made without the sandbox page, and I didn't see any from the history of edits. So I can't speak directly to Austin's work, but some overall article things I found that could use a little help are:

The lead in doesn't really accurately give an overview of the information to be found in the article so that could be edited to compass that.

There is definitely a lack of citations and references, just upon initial viewing there are none in the lead and the first isn't until the 3 subtopic. So I would definitely suggest going through and finding credible support to make the article more robust. I'm not sure the accuracy of the information without the sources being listed, so I can't analyze a lot of the information in the article without additional research to try and find where whoever edited might have gotten their information to add.

There are only images, and no maps or diagrams. Those might be beneficial to add.

The classifications of fish in America only have 2 sentences each, so I think additional information can be added to make those sub-subtopics worth their own headers or they can be combined. All the information is also largely N. American focused, so that can be broadened to include more species/examples information on other parts of the world.