User:Austun Sheffer/Censorship in Japan/Zealora Peer Review

Hi, Austun!

First of all, I can definitely see how well researched this is — great job, there!

Secondly, though, I would recommend having a summary rather than an actual quote (for the edict) so it seems more like the tone of Wikipedia. Also, I feel like you are translating a lot of Japanese terms. I would see if it’s possible to link them to other Wikipedia pages, if possible. Lastly, I noticed that your sources are on the web, but I’m not able to click on any of the links.

Overall, though, great job at expanding on a topic I’d like to know more about! Good luck on the rest of your project!

Zealora (talk) 04:30, 9 November 2019 (UTC)