User:Autonomous owl ch/Farrukh Beg/Gheizer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Autonomous owl ch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Autonomous%20owl%20ch/Farrukh_Beg?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Farrukh Beg

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello @Autonomous owl ch! Excited I got to review your article! Here is my feedback :)

Lead
Your lead is comprehensive and detailed. Gives a good background and context to the article—great job!

Content and Organization
I love that you gave a topic with limited information (only 2 sources currently on the page like what?!) new life. The structure and schematization of a before, during, and after approach gives a in-depth picture. Think one section that could possibly expanded upon was the final one on "Style and Technique". I finished that and thought, "tell me more"! The topic is neat, and overall the structure of it helped highlight it in a clear and concise way.

Tone and Balance
Your article? Neutral? Objective? Yes and YES! Felt like I was reading a real Wiki page. This in conjunction with the limited information Beg creates an awesome, original contribution. Nice work!

Sources and References
The sources you used look credible, diverse, and extensive. I got the sense of the care you put into the research process, how you went beyond a quick search and truly engaged with the sources you selected. Your citations were frequent and appropriately used. Looks great.

Overall impressions
Dude, this was awesome:) I mentioned it before, but I got the sense that you put a lot of effort into the research and topic. If I could make one suggestion, I think there is room to expand on the art itself (Style and Technique Section), but other than that, this feels pretty darn close to a final draft. What a great read, thank you!